So, I’d like to write another song. But I’m having trouble finding a suitable poem. This is where you come in.
I’m looking for a poem with several short stanzas, that isn’t very wordy and paints a picture rather than telling a story or giving a message. A very good example would be “The Engaged” by Octavio Paz (better known to some as “A Boy and a Girl”):
Stretched out on the grass
A boy and a girl.
Savoring their oranges, giving their kisses
like waves exchanging foam.Stretched out on the beach
a boy and a girl
Savoring their limes, giving their kisses
like clouds exchanging foam.Stretched out underground
a boy and a girl.
Saying nothing, never kissing,
giving silence for silence.



Maybe check out some of Mary Swander’s poetry. It’s been awhile, but iirc many of her poems were the picture-painting sort.
Thanks, i really needed this poem 4 my poetry class
its like keats poem but i think more profound..
anyway thnx for the poem..